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Adatapost Posted 17 years ago
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Respected Members,
I have two paragraphs. My request to you to check the grammer and point me please.
I read your post and it sounds like "I am afraid of its
success". Don't major your business with success/failure
barometer. Business deserves hard-working in right direction
with positive attitude. Don't escape from your
resposibilities and don't say "I am do not want to
struggle."
Why Rami is succeeded?
Because she has a power or ability to increase her struggle
index. Of course there are many other factors after Rami's
success but I strongly believe "There is no alternative to
hardwork".
Thanks.
I have two paragraphs. My request to you to check the grammer and point me please.
I read your post and it sounds like "I am afraid of its
success". Don't major your business with success/failure
barometer. Business deserves hard-working in right direction
with positive attitude. Don't escape from your
resposibilities and don't say "I am do not want to
struggle."
Why Rami is succeeded?
Because she has a power or ability to increase her struggle
index. Of course there are many other factors after Rami's
success but I strongly believe "There is no alternative to
hardwork".
Thanks.
Top answer
I read your post and it sounds like you are afraid of its success . Don't measure your business with a success/failure barometer. Business deserves hard work in the right direction with a positive attitude.
- I read your post and it sounds like you are afraid of its success .
- Don't measure your business with a success/failure barometer.
- Business deserves hard work in the right direction with a positive attitude.
- " Why has Rami succeeded ?
- Because she has the power or ability to increase her struggle index.
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I read your post and it sounds like you are afraid of its
success. Don't measure your business with a success/failure
barometer. Business deserves hard work in the right direction
with a positive attitude. Don't escape from your
responsibilities and don't say, "I don't want to
struggle."
Why has
success. Don't measure your business with a success/failure
barometer. Business deserves hard work in the right direction
with a positive attitude. Don't escape from your
responsibilities and don't say, "I don't want to
struggle."
Why has
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