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Kedra Posted 19 years ago
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Not sure in grammar and style of the sentence, please take a look, thanks!

1i00The passage is for property owners. It aims at proving that good attude towards tenants matters more than good house. I'll appreciate if someone can advice on it. Thank you!02i02br
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01b01font00VIP attitude is more important than VIP house02font02b02br
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01font01font00Even if a house for rent is not related to VIP category, you may win your clients’ favor with your professional demeanor and attentive attitude. I have seen dozens of examples when good attitude has turned out to be a good compensation for some small shortcomings of a property. Remember: you lease emotions, not properties.02font00 02font0-
  

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0I'm not sure where your intentions lie with this one, Kedra, but this is my suggestion:02br 02br 01b 01font 00VIP attitude is more important than VIP house02font 02b 02br 02br 01font 01font 00Even if a house for rent is not01b 00 the essence of luxury02b 00, you may win your 01b 00client's02b 00 favor with your professional demeanor and attentive attitude. I have seen dozens of examples 01b 00in which 02b 00good attitude 01b 00has compensated for the shortcomings02b 00 of a property. 02font 02font 02br 01font 02br 02font 0-

— Mister Micawber

  • 0I'm not sure where your intentions lie with this one, Kedra, but this is my suggestion:02br 02br 01b 01font 00VIP attitude is more important than VIP house02font 02b 02br 02br 01font 01font 00Even if a house for rent is not01b 00 the essence of luxury02b 00, you may win your 01b 00client's02b 00 favor with your professional demeanor and attentive attitude.
  • I have seen dozens of examples 01b 00in which 02b 00good attitude 01b 00has compensated for the shortcomings02b 00 of a property.
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0I'm not sure where your intentions lie with this one, Kedra, but this is my suggestion:02br
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01font01font00Even if a house for rent is not01b00 the essence of lux
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Thank you, Mister Micawber ! Your suggestion sounds better than my copy. I appreciate your advice and corrections. [A]
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