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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Not sure if the wording is right

I would like to hear more about interesting development opportunities.
Please contact me via mail, I'll reply with my attached CV.

Thanks ahead for your help Emotion: smile
  

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I would like to hear more about interesting development opportunities. Please contact me via mail, I'll reply with my attached CV. I always struggle with this kind of formal mails, and would love to get some help with this one.

  • I would like to hear more about interesting development opportunities.
  • Please contact me via mail, I'll reply with my attached CV.
  • I always struggle with this kind of formal mails, and would love to get some help with this one.
  • Thanks ahead.
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I would like to hear more about interesting development opportunities.
Please contact me via mail, I'll reply with my attached CV.

I always struggle with this kind of formal mails, and would love to get some help with this one.
Thanks ahead.
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Your sentence is not clear. It could be either of the two below, or even something else.

I would like to hear more about interesting development opportunities for development.
I would like to hear more about interesting developments and opportunities.

Please contact me via mail (do you mean email? or the postal service?) and I'll re
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I disagree with Alphecca about once every 4000 posts, I think, but this is one of them.

"Development opportunities" means "opportunities for development" -- how you can advance in your professional knowledge. It's the word "interesting" that I'd drop.
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This is what I meant to say:

I would like to hear more about interesting opportunities for developers.
Please contact me via e-mail and I'll send you a reply and enclose my CV.

Thank you for the quick reply!
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You're a developer?

Is this how you are asking for a job?

(I retract my earlier response on "development opportunities" since that's clearly not what you were asking about.)
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And I omitted the interesting. Emotion: smile
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BarbaraPAI disagree with Alphecca about once every 4000 posts, I think, but this is one of them.
It demonstrates that we read the original post in different ways. The original post was completely misleading!
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This is why I came here... I know I'm having a hard time phrasing myself in a more professional way...
I am a developer, and I'm replying to a recruiter that addressed me and I have no way way to reply with my resume attached.
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RiviI would like to hear more about interesting opportunities for developers.
If I were you, I would be much more focused on my skills. "Developers" can cover a huge range of capabilities and assignments.
Do you mean "web site developers"?
If so, be specific and mention the technologies that you have skills for, such as Azure, php, or something more
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RiviThis is why I came here... I know I'm having a hard time phrasing myself in a more professional way...I am a developer, and I'm replying to a recruiter that addressed me and I have no way way to reply with my resume attached.
In your cover letter, write the juicy bits that would excite your potential employer. Be succinct, so it's a fast read. If you excit

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