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Wilhelm Tell Posted 15 years ago
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Not sure how to phrase sentence...

Hallo,

I am making a bulletpoint presentation for an essay.

The First point (or sentence):

1. Susan Atkins was incarcerated for nearly forty years, the longest any woman has been imprisoned in the state of California

The second:

2. She has eighteen parole hearings throughout her prison sentence.

Are both sentences correct?

Thank You!
  

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Hi, I am making a bulletpoint presentation for an essay. The First point (or sentence): 1. Susan Atkins was incarcerated for nearly forty years, the longest any woman has been imprisoned in the state of California The second: 2.

— Clive

  • Hi, I am making a bulletpoint presentation for an essay.
  • The First point (or sentence): 1.
  • Susan Atkins was incarcerated for nearly forty years, the longest any woman has been imprisoned in the state of California The second: 2.
  • She has had eighteen parole hearings throughout her prison sentence.
  • Are both sentences correct?
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Hi,

I am making a bulletpoint presentation for an essay.

The First point (or sentence):

1. Susan Atkins was incarcerated for nearly forty years, the longest any woman has been imprisoned in the state of California

The second:

2. She has had eighteen parole hearings throughout her pr
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Thanks a bunch!

You are correct, a bullet point is NOT full sentence. I forget.

Thanks Clive!
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