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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Not only...but also

The copy reads "Not only can you propose future projects for the RA, but also our meetings are regularly attended by local elected officials who use them as a direct point of contact."

Is this correct or should the "but also" be followed by a "...you can discuss points of interest with local, elected officials, who attend the meetings and are interested in community viewpoints."
  

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You are correct to notice the lack of parallelism in the first version. I believe your version would correct this problem. CJ

  • You are correct to notice the lack of parallelism in the first version.
  • I believe your version would correct this problem.
  • CJ
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You are correct to notice the lack of parallelism in the first version. I believe your version would correct this problem.

CJ

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