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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
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Which of the following sentences are acceptable, (1) or (2) ?

(1) Wealth, prestige, and power do not necessarily make people happy.
(2) Wealth, prestige, and power are not indicative of making people happy.
  

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Hi, Which of the following sentences are acceptable, (1) or (2) ? (1) Wealth, prestige, and power do not necessarily make people happy. (2) Wealth, prestige, and power are not indicative of happiness making people happy .

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  • Hi, Which of the following sentences are acceptable, (1) or (2) ?
  • (1) Wealth, prestige, and power do not necessarily make people happy.
  • (2) Wealth, prestige, and power are not indicative of happiness making people happy .
  • Both are OK as edited.
  • I wouldn't put a comma after 'prestige'.
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Hi,

Which of the following sentences are acceptable, (1) or (2) ?
(1) Wealth, prestige, and power do not necessarily make people happy.
(2) Wealth, prestige, and power are not indicative of happiness making people happy.

Both are OK as edited.
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