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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Since a new head coarch joined their basketball team that keeps losing a month ago, all the members have tried hard to change everything. It will not be long before they see un upset.

  

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Anonymous Since a new head coarch coach joined their basketball team , which that keeps losing a month ago , all the members players have tried been trying hard to change everything. It will not be long before they see a n upset. As shown.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous Since a new head coarch coach joined their basketball team , which that keeps losing a month ago , all the members players have tried been trying hard to change everything.
  • It will not be long before they see a n upset.
  • As shown.
  • You can't say "keeps losing", which is what they are always doing now, and then say "a month ago" in the same sentence.
  • The sentences seem to be arguing that the players are trying hard, and therefore they will fail and experience an upset.
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AnonymousSince a new head coarch coach joined their basketball team, which that keeps losing a month ago, all the members players have tried
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