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Anulka67 Posted 19 years ago
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Not finished new years story
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00 I have a lot memory from childhood , but every year on 31 december i remind one of them . My first new years eve , allways before this day i go slept too early. 02 br
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00 In that special day, I was at home. The day began like every other. I woke up at 14 o'clock , beacouse i wanna be realy ( have enought sleep time i dont know word). I wear something , ate breakfast , and went with my famili to grandmother . There i was waiting for fireworks show . Every secund was long like hour . After eleven p.m i was realy ( not enough sleep ? ) , but i realy wanna see fireworks. 02 br
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00 This is only half this what i must write ;( can some one check , and write something more ? 0-
00 I have a lot memory from childhood , but every year on 31 december i remind one of them . My first new years eve , allways before this day i go slept too early. 02 br
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00 In that special day, I was at home. The day began like every other. I woke up at 14 o'clock , beacouse i wanna be realy ( have enought sleep time i dont know word). I wear something , ate breakfast , and went with my famili to grandmother . There i was waiting for fireworks show . Every secund was long like hour . After eleven p.m i was realy ( not enough sleep ? ) , but i realy wanna see fireworks. 02 br
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00 This is only half this what i must write ;( can some one check , and write something more ? 0-
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- ] 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 In 00 that special day, I was at home.
- The day began like every other.
- 02 font 00 I 00 wear 00 00 something 00 , ate breakfast , and went with my 00 famili 00 to 00 grandmother 00 .
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1 font 00 I'm not going to write your essay for you (cheeky!), but here are some things that you need to look at again: 02 font 02 br
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00 I have a lot 01 font 00 of 02 font 00 memories 00 from childhood, but every year on 31 00 D 00 ecember 00 I 00 00 remind 00 one of them . My first
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00 I have a lot 01 font 00 of 02 font 00 memories 00 from childhood, but every year on 31 00 D 00 ecember 00 I 00 00 remind 00 one of them . My first
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0 00 I dont have time to spend ;/ I still writing this ... 02 br
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