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Sun 94 Posted 15 years ago
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If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments? Thanks in advance.
1. Seven professional singers , most of whom are specialized in each area, such as pop, ballad, rock, compete at the TV show called ' I am a singer' .
2. XX's singing ability or style is not as appealing or impressive as other contestants. That is, Her singing style or performance is monotonous. I mean whatever songs she sings, she sings in the same style , which fails to move or give deep impression to the audience.
1. Seven professional singers , most of whom are specialized in each area, such as pop, ballad, rock, compete at the TV show called ' I am a singer' .
2. XX's singing ability or style is not as appealing or impressive as other contestants. That is, Her singing style or performance is monotonous. I mean whatever songs she sings, she sings in the same style , which fails to move or give deep impression to the audience.
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Dear Sun
Generally, your sentences are OK but..
(1) I would use "each" in a different way..
- Seven professional singers , each of whom is specialized in an area such as pop, ballad or rock, compete at the TV show called 'I am a singer'.
(2) You just need to lose the capital "H" and put an "a" before "deep"..
- XX's singing ability or style is not as a
Generally, your sentences are OK but..
(1) I would use "each" in a different way..
- Seven professional singers , each of whom is specialized in an area such as pop, ballad or rock, compete at the TV show called 'I am a singer'.
(2) You just need to lose the capital "H" and put an "a" before "deep"..
- XX's singing ability or style is not as a
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