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Essay & Composition Writing

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If you see any mistakes, please correct me.

( After teacher gave handouts that contains a short essay to students)

What you see on the handout is not a perfect essay. It has a lot of mistakes such as grammar vocabualry, or off topic sentence. Now, I would like you to take the role of an editor. A good editor knows how to improve the paper. You will have not not only correct grammar mistakes but also replace some words with othe words...
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: If you see any mistakes, please correct me. ( After teacher gave handouts that contains a short essay to students) What you see on the handout is not a perfect essay. It has a lot of mistakes such as grammar vocabualry , or off topic sentence .

  • I have underlined some problem areas: If you see any mistakes, please correct me.
  • ( After teacher gave handouts that contains a short essay to students) What you see on the handout is not a perfect essay.
  • It has a lot of mistakes such as grammar vocabualry , or off topic sentence .
  • Now, I would like you to take the role of an editor.
  • A good editor knows how to improve the paper.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

If you see any mistakes, please correct me.
( After teacher gave handouts that contains a short essay to students)

What you see on the handout is not a perfect essay. It has a lot of mistakes such as grammar vocabualry, or off topic sentence. Now, I would like you to take the role of an editor. A
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1.such as grammar, vocabularly, or off-topic sentence.

2. You will have to not only correct .... with other words.
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1.such as grammar, vocabularly, or off-topic sentence.
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vocabularies

sentences

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