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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
non smoking room
For a hotel reply to a guest request for a non smoking room,
could you please check if the following sentence flow sounds natural in a business letter context?
Unfortunately, we do not have any non-smoking rooms available for the dates. We will make every effort based on availability at the time of check-in. We will at least try to erase smoke smell as much as possible, using an ozone deodorization device.
could you please check if the following sentence flow sounds natural in a business letter context?
Unfortunately, we do not have any non-smoking rooms available for the dates. We will make every effort based on availability at the time of check-in. We will at least try to erase smoke smell as much as possible, using an ozone deodorization device.
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I would give a little more detail. Here are my suggestions. Unfortunately, we do not have any non-smoking rooms available for the dates you requested .
- I would give a little more detail.
- Here are my suggestions.
- Unfortunately, we do not have any non-smoking rooms available for the dates you requested .
- We will make every effort to provide one based on what is available availability at the time of check-in.
- If we cannot obtain a non-smoking room for you, we We will at least try to erase any smoke smell as much as possible by using an ozone deodorization device.
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I would give a little more detail. Here are my suggestions.
Unfortunately, we do not have any non-smoking rooms available for the dates you requested. We will make every effort to provide one based on what is availableavailability at the time of check-in. If we cannot obtain a non-smoking room for you, we We will at least
Unfortunately, we do not have any non-smoking rooms available for the dates you requested. We will make every effort to provide one based on what is available
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Thank you very much. I am so glad my expression has got so much better.
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I don't think 'obtain' is quite right, and it could still use considerable tightening.
Unfortunately, we have no non-smoking room currently available for your dates. We will make every effort to provide one when you check in. If we cannot, we will try to eliminate any tobacco odor with an ozone deodorization device. We hope
Unfortunately, we have no non-smoking room currently available for your dates. We will make every effort to provide one when you check in. If we cannot, we will try to eliminate any tobacco odor with an ozone deodorization device. We hope
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