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Noemanza Posted 16 years ago
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Noemanza

can you help me?

It´s rigth this paragraph?

The farmers followed the life cycle natural of the animals. the animals grew up in farms, they were in the pastures during the day, where they fed on lush grass and at nigth they slept in the stables.

quiero decir: los granjeros seguían el ciclo natural de los animales. los animales crecían en las granjes, estaban el las praderas por el día, donde comían rica hierba y por la noche dormían en los establos.

thank you.

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The farmers followed the natural life cycles of the animals. The animals grew up in farms. During the day they stayed in the pastures where they fed on grass, while at night they slept in the stables.

  • The farmers followed the natural life cycles of the animals.
  • The animals grew up in farms.
  • During the day they stayed in the pastures where they fed on grass, while at night they slept in the stables.
  • I just reworded it a bit to make it sound a little smoother, aside from that it was great ^^
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The farmers followed the natural life cycles of the animals. The animals grew up in farms. During the day they stayed in the pastures where they fed on grass, while at night they slept in the stables.

I just reworded it a bit to make it sound a little smoother, aside from that it was great ^^
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Hi,

It´s rigth this paragraph?

The farmers followed the life cycle natural of the animals. the animals grew up in farms, they were in the pastures during the day, where they fed on lush grass and at nigth they slept in the stables.

The farmers followed the natural life cycle of the animals. The animals were raised on farms, were in the pastures during the day, where the

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