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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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No fears

1b00No fears and no regrets02b00, I will spare no effort to become a scientist 01u00who will02u00 make contributions to the whole world.02br
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00The words in bold sound odd to me. I would change them into "01b00With no fears and no regrets02b00." Does it sound right now? 02br
00Besides, 01u00who will02u00 seems stilted here, and I would substitute 01b00and02b00 for it. What do you think? Thanks.02br
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0 I think both of your changes would be improvements of the original.02br
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