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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Nikol
hi, I am writing an introduction to our company, I am not native speaker and I am afraid that I have made a lot of mistakes in wordorder and also I am not sure if the meaning is right. Can you please check it, if it make some sense?
Thank you :
Good quality of repair is ensured with use of good-class materials and original spare parts as well as with continuous (through)testing during repair and thorough final inspection which also includes vibration measurements.
Shaft repair and subsequent balancing of rotor prolong the life and effectivity of electric motors.
We provide:
-mechanical repairs as well as making of new shafts,endshields and other components,
-exchange of bearings
-balancing of rotors up tp 3 tons,custom-made production using CNC horizontal boring machine WH105
We offer the sale of new electric motors as well as the sale of refurbished electric motors in case of repair with method of exchange using our own stocks.
Can You please check it? The last sentence is the worst one :-P i guess
Thank You
Thank you :
Good quality of repair is ensured with use of good-class materials and original spare parts as well as with continuous (through)testing during repair and thorough final inspection which also includes vibration measurements.
Shaft repair and subsequent balancing of rotor prolong the life and effectivity of electric motors.
We provide:
-mechanical repairs as well as making of new shafts,endshields and other components,
-exchange of bearings
-balancing of rotors up tp 3 tons,custom-made production using CNC horizontal boring machine WH105
We offer the sale of new electric motors as well as the sale of refurbished electric motors in case of repair with method of exchange using our own stocks.
Can You please check it? The last sentence is the worst one :-P i guess
Thank You
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It is hard to determine what you mean to say by just reading what you wrote.
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Here are some suggestions:
Quality repairs are ensured through the use of first-class materials and factory original spare parts, as well as through testing during repair and a thorough final inspection, which also includes vibration testing.
Shaft repair and balancing of the rotor prolong the life and
Quality repairs are ensured through the use of first-class materials and factory original spare parts, as well as through testing during repair and a thorough final inspection, which also includes vibration testing.
Shaft repair and balancing of the rotor prolong the life and
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Yes , I think efficiency suits very well.
And yes, exactly, the customer brings us an old motor, and for exchange we give him the same but repaired from our stocks, he pays for the repair of the old one, do not need to wait, and the old one we keep for onother customer.
Thank you very much for all your suggestions!
And yes, exactly, the customer brings us an old motor, and for exchange we give him the same but repaired from our stocks, he pays for the repair of the old one, do not need to wait, and the old one we keep for onother customer.
Thank you very much for all your suggestions!
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And can I write this:
Complete current offer of our electric motors you can find on: *** ?
Does it make sense?
Thank You
Complete current offer of our electric motors you can find on: *** ?
Does it make sense?
Thank You
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You could say something like: You can find a complete list of the electric motors we have available at ***.
AnonymousComplete current offer of our electric motors you can find on: *** ?
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