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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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Nike
Writing a shoe review:
The new casual line from Nike is cool as can be. They're inconspicuous Nikes, but you'll never know, because the swoosh mark has been put in stealth mode. The design is top notch and has also very creatively made the Nike Hachi fresh and new to the eye, thus keeping the brand on top of the shoe game. Thanks to sneakerhead for delivering them safely to my feet.
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The new casual line from Nike is cool as can be. They're inconspicuous Nikes, but you'll never know, because the swoosh mark has been put in stealth mode. The design is top notch and has also very creatively made the Nike Hachi fresh and new to the eye, thus keeping the brand on top of the shoe game. Thanks to sneakerhead for delivering them safely to my feet.
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It sounds ok to me.
- It sounds ok to me.
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