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Marc93 Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

nightout for son

Is it written correctly for a formal letter
I request you to grant my son xxx to proceed for a night out because I am coming to zzz and wanna meet him. He will be be under my direct care during this nightout. Thanking you in anticipation
  

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marc93 Is it written correctly for a formal letter No, there are some issues. 1. "nightout" is not a valid word.

— AlpheccaStars

  • marc93 Is it written correctly for a formal letter No, there are some issues.
  • 1.
  • "nightout" is not a valid word.
  • 2.
  • "wanna" is not a valid word.
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marc93Is it written correctly for a formal letter
No, there are some issues.
1. "nightout" is not a valid word.
2. "wanna" is not a valid word.
3. I cannot understand what you mean by *** and zzz.
4. "be be" is not grammatical.
5. The last "sentence" is a fragment.
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marc93Is it written correctly for a formal letter You need a question mark here.
Is it written correctly for a formal letter?
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Thank you replying. But tell me
1. What do I replace nightout with
2. The last sentence how Is it a fragment? And basically how do I complete it ?
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I request you to grant my son *** to proceed for a night out because I am coming to zzz and wanna meet him. He will be be under my direct care during this nightout. Thanking you in anticipation
during this nightout -> during this special evening
Thanking you in anticipation -> I thank you for your attention. / Thank you in advance for your approval.
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Thanks a lot @AlpheccaStars For your suggestions.
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