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Newbie1 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Nightmares short paragraph

Please proofread: All my life I wanted to be a super hero/vigilante to expunge the scums and lowlifes of our world... Till this day I still remember what I said to my friend Justin when we saw the planes crash into the twin towers on CNN, "we gotta save those ppl! You're superman, I'm batman, and Chris can be spidey!" NYC needs us. That's why I joined the military and is also why I will do it again to protect us from the terrorists that want to take our freedoms away.
  

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Can someone please help me with this paragraph? It's for a college project.

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Can someone please help me with this paragraph? It's for a college project.
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Welcome to the forum, Newbie!.

If it's for a college project, I'm afraid we can't help you. Your teacher wants to know what you can do, not what we can do.
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It's just a rough draft and only a very small part of the whole essay. I'm not asking you to change the content but only the grammar and punctuation.
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fivejedjonWelcome to the forum, Newbie!.If it's for a college project, I'm afraid we can't help you. Your teacher wants to know what you can do, not what we can do.
Heres my own corrections : Please proofread: All my life I wanted to be a super hero/vigilante to expunge the scums and lowlifes of our world. Till this day I still remember what I said to my frie
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Sorry but I misspoke. It's actually not for a project but my own writing practice. Any guidance would be appreciated.
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