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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Night Market
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It was a fine, but hot night. Sam felt bored at home. He followed his brother / He decided to follow his brother to a night market in Taman Ria. It was about seven o’clock at night / in the evening. When they reached there, it / there was crowded with many people/the market was bustling with many people.
There had a wide space along the street. / The spacious and comfortable environment drew attentions of customers coming there every Tuesday. Sam saw a wide range of stalls selling different kinds of things like / such as food, drinks, toys, clothes, and so on. They were sold at a reasonable price / at reasonable prices. Some customers bargained (with sellers) over the prices.
They bought a lot of daily goods / household things /groceries from stallholders. / Before going home, Sam bought a packet of fried noodles while his brother bought some apple juice as their dinner. They felt satisfied. It was really enjoyable and fun there.
It was a fine, but hot night. Sam felt bored at home. He followed his brother / He decided to follow his brother to a night market in Taman Ria. It was about seven o’clock at night / in the evening. When they reached there, it / there was crowded with many people/the market was bustling with many people.
There had a wide space along the street. / The spacious and comfortable environment drew attentions of customers coming there every Tuesday. Sam saw a wide range of stalls selling different kinds of things like / such as food, drinks, toys, clothes, and so on. They were sold at a reasonable price / at reasonable prices. Some customers bargained (with sellers) over the prices.
They bought a lot of daily goods / household things /groceries from stallholders. / Before going home, Sam bought a packet of fried noodles while his brother bought some apple juice as their dinner. They felt satisfied. It was really enjoyable and fun there.
Top answer
It was a fine, hot night. Sam was bored at home. He followed his brother to the night market in Taman Ria.
- It was a fine, hot night.
- Sam was bored at home.
- He followed his brother to the night market in Taman Ria.
- It was about seven o’clock.
- When they reached it, the market was bustling.
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It was a fine, hot night. Sam was bored at home. He followed his brother to the night market in Taman Ria. It was about seven o’clock. When they reached it, the market was bustling. Sam saw stalls selling food, drinks, toys, clothes, and so on at reasonable prices. Some customers were bargaining loudly over the prices. They bought a lot of groceries from the stalls. Sam bought a packet of fried
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