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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
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New Yorker's Cafe"

This is a self-made sentence for an explanation of a hotel offer.
Could you please tell me if the following sentences sound natural ?
This plan includes a ticket for a breakfast served at a nearby cafe called "New Yorker's Cafe".
Offer includes breakfast certificates for each night's stay. 
The cafe offers some options of continental breakfasts.
Certificates are non-refundable.If for any reason you need to shorten your stay, tickets for cancelled nights must be returned to the hotel.
  

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This plan includes breakfast at the nearby New Yorker's Cafe. Offer includes breakfast vouchers for each night's stay. The cafe offers several continental breakfasts.

— Mister Micawber

  • This plan includes breakfast at the nearby New Yorker's Cafe.
  • Offer includes breakfast vouchers for each night's stay.
  • The cafe offers several continental breakfasts.
  • Vouchers are non-refundable.
  • If for any reason you shorten your s tay, vouchers should be returned to the reception desk,
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This plan includes breakfast at the nearby New Yorker's Cafe.
Offer includes breakfast vouchers for each night's stay.
The cafe offers several continental breakfasts.
Vouchers are non-refundable. If for any reason you shorten your stay, vouchers should be returned to the reception desk,
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