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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

New to poetry

hi,

i am new to poetry and i am very excited and enthusiastic about writing my own poems, if possible. i just finished writing one in a very short time and was wondering if you all could read it and give me some tips on how i could improve it? thanks - please read the poem below:-

Love’s hate, defeat of hearts.

Love’s deceitful, death of hearts.

Love’s mistaken, misused by humans.

Love’s lost, crushes humans.



It does not come easy,

It does not go easy,

Human’s so intrigued by it,

Yet so intimidated by it,



It’s a puzzle, no human can solve,

It fulfils life, when in it,

It breaks life, when broken in it,

It’s a puzzle, no one can solve,



I did not see it coming over me,

I did not think it would bring me so much grief,

I did not see it breaking me,

I did not think it would be so instant and brief,

Oh I wish one could understand its affects

Because love’s pure, unselfish, and wins over hearts.

  

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Hi anon, Remember this is poetry. Your lines don't have to be sentences. Just my two cents.

  • Hi anon, Remember this is poetry.
  • Your lines don't have to be sentences.
  • Just my two cents.
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Hi anon,

Remember this is poetry. Your lines don't have to be sentences. Just my two cents.

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