New Poem I wrote please Read and Review

Here is a new poem I have written. I would like to improve it in any way possible. Any advice/ CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated.

We spun the sea like a top

Watching its pattern

Coalesce.

And like a box of mix-matched crayons,

It created

a blighted

rainbow - a trove

of mystical unknowns.

We sat.

We stared.

We admired.

Soon sadly deprived

of our omniscience.

Truth crashed in;

Killed those unorthodox dreams

As the sea slowed down to a stop.

And awareness found its way home.