Neither Nor?
Hey, I am editing a document and I have to edit this sentence. For some reason, it does not sound right.
None of us have it all; the grades, fair complexion, admirable height, zero size, perfect pointed nose, glowing skin, beautiful wide eyes, curvy body, pretty natural hair, perfect social circle, neither can we have it all.
By zero size, the writer probably means low weight. Please tell me if this sentence is constructed correctly.
Top answer
Most of it is okay. ,natural hair, perfect social circle. "
- Most of it is okay.
- ,natural hair, perfect social circle.
- "
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
Most of it is okay. This should be something like:
"None of us have it all: the grades,....,natural hair, perfect social circle. None of us can have all of it."
0
Related Questions