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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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negotiating salary
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When negotiating your salary, ask for a higher than you expect amount that way, the employer will counter with an amount that convienences you. The counter off will be what you expect.
When negotiating your salary, ask for a higher than you expect amount that way, the employer will counter with an amount that convienences you. The counter off will be what you expect.
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I would break up the first sentence and move "amount" so that "higher" immediately modifies it. " Here is my suggested wording: When negotiating your salary, ask for a higher amount than you expect. ] you.
- I would break up the first sentence and move "amount" so that "higher" immediately modifies it.
- " Here is my suggested wording: When negotiating your salary, ask for a higher amount than you expect.
- ] you.
- The counteroffer will be what you originally expected .
- I hope this works for you.
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I would break up the first sentence and move "amount" so that "higher" immediately modifies it. Also, I am not sure what you are trying to say with "conveniences." Here is my suggested wording:
When negotiating your salary, ask for a higher amount than you expect. That way the employer will counter with an amount that satisfies [?] you. The counteroffer will be what you
When negotiating your salary, ask for a higher amount than you expect. That way the employer will counter with an amount that satisfies [?] you. The counteroffer will be what you
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