"To negotiate a price" is idiomatic. In "she would drop their price," " their " needs an antecedent. "With all the realtor" has a number agreement problem.
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AnonymousIs there something unnatural?I was able toAs written, it is not a grammatical and very clear sentence. You have pronoun and verb agreement issues.