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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 11 years ago
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Needs corrections
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Is the following sentence correct? How would you re-write it?
This activity will be useful for him because he will read and be exposed to not only the written form of the phrases but he will also do the activity with the help of visuals.
Is the following sentence correct? How would you re-write it?
This activity will be useful for him because he will read and be exposed to not only the written form of the phrases but he will also do the activity with the help of visuals.
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It's OK.
- It's OK.
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I am being picky with this but I think that's the only thing left to improve!
"...he will also complete the activity... " is more formal and better fits the overall tone. To do is very informal.
"...he will also complete the activity... " is more formal and better fits the overall tone. To do is very informal.
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I find this sentence lacks correct parallelism.
Here is a correct version.
This activity will be useful for him because he will not only read and be exposed to the written form of the phrases but will also do the activity with the help of visuals.
Here is a correct version.
This activity will be useful for him because he will not only read and be exposed to the written form of the phrases but will also do the activity with the help of visuals.
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