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Wijaya.theresia Posted 17 years ago
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Needed Help to review my grammar
Hi,
I would like to have an ielts test on the mid of 2009. I need your kindness and help to review my English grammar. your kindness and help would be great appreciated.
Regards,
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The following is simple letter to manager about "Some problems at work"
· Some problems at work
You recently took a part time job working for a local company. After a few weeks you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
o explain why you took the job
o describe the problems that you experienced
o suggest what could be done about them.===
Dear System Senior Manager,
It has been pleasure for me to work with your company as freelance computer programmer. I have been working with your company almost eight months. I have picked up the big picture of the existing system and the new requirement of the new project. Nevertheless, I have some thought about a few things that I need to share with you. Firstly is lack of leadership in the team. The team is very good in the technical skill, everyone has own thought about the software architecture. We had spent much time for the discussion about that matter, but we have not been managed the final design because there are a lot of pros and cons for each idea. We must decide which method are going to use. Secondly, the job description still undefined clearly, which means every team member is doing many things at the same time. These issues is causing a team member would not be efficient. Definitely, each of task could not be done perfectly.
In order to manage these problems. I have done the list of our progress and summary of our discussion about the software architecture. These summary would be submitted on tomorrow morning before lunch. I am expecting that you could took a decision and necessary action in order to utilize our team. Your feedback and support would be greatly appreciated.
Your Sincerely,
Mr. ABC
I would like to have an ielts test on the mid of 2009. I need your kindness and help to review my English grammar. your kindness and help would be great appreciated.
Regards,
There==
The following is simple letter to manager about "Some problems at work"
· Some problems at work
You recently took a part time job working for a local company. After a few weeks you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
o explain why you took the job
o describe the problems that you experienced
o suggest what could be done about them.===
Dear System Senior Manager,
It has been pleasure for me to work with your company as freelance computer programmer. I have been working with your company almost eight months. I have picked up the big picture of the existing system and the new requirement of the new project. Nevertheless, I have some thought about a few things that I need to share with you. Firstly is lack of leadership in the team. The team is very good in the technical skill, everyone has own thought about the software architecture. We had spent much time for the discussion about that matter, but we have not been managed the final design because there are a lot of pros and cons for each idea. We must decide which method are going to use. Secondly, the job description still undefined clearly, which means every team member is doing many things at the same time. These issues is causing a team member would not be efficient. Definitely, each of task could not be done perfectly.
In order to manage these problems. I have done the list of our progress and summary of our discussion about the software architecture. These summary would be submitted on tomorrow morning before lunch. I am expecting that you could took a decision and necessary action in order to utilize our team. Your feedback and support would be greatly appreciated.
Your Sincerely,
Mr. ABC
Top answer
theresia Dear System Senior Manager, It has been a pleasure for me to work with your company as a freelance computer programmer. I have been working with your company for almost eight months . and I have picked up the big picture of the existing system and the new requirements of the new project.
- theresia Dear System Senior Manager, It has been a pleasure for me to work with your company as a freelance computer programmer.
- I have been working with your company for almost eight months .
- and I have picked up the big picture of the existing system and the new requirements of the new project.
- Nevertheless, I have some thoughts about a few things that I need to share with you.
- Firstly, it is the lack of leadership in the team.
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wijaya.theresiaDear System Senior Manager,
It has been a pleasure for me to work with your company as a freelance computer programmer. I have been working with your company for almost eight months.and I have picked up the big picture of the existing system and the new requirements of the new project. Nevertheless, I have some thoughts about a few thin
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Hi rafaelinrio,
Thank you very much for your help and assistance. I really appreciated it !!!
do you mind if i ask your help to review some more articles / essay ? bcoz I eager to learn a proper english. since english is not our first language, so I am expecting much from the native speaker on this community to help me.
Your kindness and assistance would be greatly appreci
Thank you very much for your help and assistance. I really appreciated it !!!
do you mind if i ask your help to review some more articles / essay ? bcoz I eager to learn a proper english. since english is not our first language, so I am expecting much from the native speaker on this community to help me.
Your kindness and assistance would be greatly appreci
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