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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Need your help. Thank you.

Can you help me check these stenences' grammar.
Thank you very much.

The key features of parents are that they need to educate and encourage their children.

Two reasons for my perceptions are presented as follows.

The suit looks like old and fades.

Only when tailor use good materials do consumers preserve their clothes permanently.
  

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" The sentence it self is a bit wierd, "preserve their clothes permanently" is a little odd but be sure not to forget the article infront of "tailor" and to conjugate "use" in the proper tense.

  • " The sentence it self is a bit wierd, "preserve their clothes permanently" is a little odd but be sure not to forget the article infront of "tailor" and to conjugate "use" in the proper tense.
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Not bad you only have a few errors:

"The suit looks old and faded" you don't need to insert the "like" here

"Only when the tailor uses good materials do consumers preserve their clothes permanently." The sentence it self is a bit wierd, "preserve their clothes permanently" is a little odd but be sure not to forget the article infront of "tailor" and to conjugate "use" in the p

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