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Brentlopez001 Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
need your help guys!
Is the below memo correct? thanks in advance
Dear All,
Please be informed that the head office requested the emirates identification no of all maintenance staff. In regards with this, you are hereby requested to give your number tomorrow as they need it at once. Thank you for your cooperation.
Dear All,
Please be informed that the head office requested the emirates identification no of all maintenance staff. In regards with this, you are hereby requested to give your number tomorrow as they need it at once. Thank you for your cooperation.
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No; it is turgid. You will make your readers impatient and irritated. Dear All, The head office has requested the Emirates identification numbers of all maintenance staff.
- No; it is turgid.
- You will make your readers impatient and irritated.
- Dear All, The head office has requested the Emirates identification numbers of all maintenance staff.
- Please give me your number tomorrow as they need it at once.
- Thank you.
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No; it is turgid. You will make your readers impatient and irritated.
Dear All,
The head office has requested the Emirates identification numbers of all maintenance staff. Please give me your number tomorrow as they need it at once. Thank you.
Dear All,
The head office has requested the Emirates identification numbers of all maintenance staff. Please give me your number tomorrow as they need it at once. Thank you.
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