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Brentlopez001 Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

need your help guys

Hi guys! please help me on the warning letter i prepared below. I need some corrections and additional points to make it good. Thanks!

"This letter is a warning for your poor performance over the past months. It has been reported that you were not doing your job appropriately. As Maintenance personnel for night shift, your function is to ensure that all machineries are in good working condition. Unfinished work has to be reported to the assigned morning shift maintenance to pursue the task.
Enclosed herewith are the copies of machine list that will serve as your checklist and should be submitted on daily basis.
This warning is for you to refrain from doing such to avoid the severe consequences in the future.
Please be guided accordingly.
  

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Your letter is OK, but you need to list specific details of poor performance. SUBJ: WARNING LETTER This letter is a warning about your poor performance over the past [number] months. It has been reported that you have not been doing your job appropriately.

  • Your letter is OK, but you need to list specific details of poor performance.
  • SUBJ: WARNING LETTER This letter is a warning about your poor performance over the past [number] months.
  • It has been reported that you have not been doing your job appropriately.
  • As a night shift maintenance worker , your function is to ensure that all machinery is in good working condition.
  • [Insert specific details of reported failings] Unfinished work must be reported to the assigned morning shift maintenance.
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Your letter is OK, but you need to list specific details of poor performance.


SUBJ: WARNING LETTER

This letter is a warning about your poor performance over the past [number] months. It has been reported that you have not been doing your job appropriately. As a night shift maintenance worker, your function is to ensure that al
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Thank you so much Mister Micawber.!
*** Bless!

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