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Gamma Posted 17 years ago
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Hi dear friends! I really need your help. I need to translate a text, but have some problems with grammar... Could you please check these sentences and correct them...

After a five-day rest our office resumes work. This break provided an opportunity for me and my collegues to take a complete rest and spent time with our relatives. My friend Julie, for instance, visited her family in California. Helen travelled to her homeland and devoted these days to her grandparents, while her sister Lili preferred to visit London once again. Perhabs, she really liked this city during her recent trip to England... Meanwhile, our boss was busy with his health.
  

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After a five-day rest, our office resumes work. This break provided an opportunity for my colleagues and I to take a complete rest and to spend time with our relatives. My friend Julie, for instance, visited her family in California.

  • After a five-day rest, our office resumes work.
  • This break provided an opportunity for my colleagues and I to take a complete rest and to spend time with our relatives.
  • My friend Julie, for instance, visited her family in California.
  • Helen travelled to her homeland and devoted those days to her grandparents, while her sister Lili preferred to visit London once again.
  • She really liked this city during her recent trip to England.
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After a five-day rest, our office resumes work. This break provided an opportunity for my colleagues and I to take a complete rest and to spend time with our relatives. My friend Julie, for instance, visited her family in California. Helen travelled to her homeland and devoted those days to her grandparents, while her sister Lili preferred to visit London once again. She really liked this cit
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Thanks for your help!!Emotion: smile
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Doctor Dfor my colleagues and I to take a complete rest and to spend time with our relatives.


I'm sure you meant my colleagues and me.
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Right you are. "an opportunity for me..."

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