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Smoking puts peoples health at risk.

Smokes are made of toxic material that is detrimental to people’s health.

No matter how I tried to persuade him to quit smoking, he still continued to light his cigarette.

The policy of abnning smoking can decrease in frequency of smokers suffering from lung cancer.

When employees enjoying smoking at work, seeming to not to pay attention on their duties.

Once workers are not to light up their cigarettes, they just put their energy and effort in their tasks.
  

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Smoking puts people's health at risk. Smoke is composed of toxic material that is detrimental to people’s health. No matter how hard I tried to persuade him to quit smoking, he still continued to light his cigarettes.

  • Smoking puts people's health at risk.
  • Smoke is composed of toxic material that is detrimental to people’s health.
  • No matter how hard I tried to persuade him to quit smoking, he still continued to light his cigarettes.
  • The policy of banning smoking can decrease the number of smokers suffering from lung cancer.
  • When employees enjoy smoking at work, they seem not to pay attention to their duties.
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Smoking puts people's health at risk.

Smoke is composed of toxic material that is detrimental to people’s health.

No matter how hard I tried to persuade him to quit smoking, he still continued to light his cigarettes.

The policy of banning smoking can decrease the number of smokers suffering from lung cancer.

When employees enjoy smoking at work, they seem n

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