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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

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I think thses sentences still have a lot of rooms for improvement.
Please, help me check them.
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What is the good quality of a son or a daughter is obedience

Whenever parents need to be looked after, their sons or daughters stayed beside them.

They lived with their parents until they graduated from school and found a job.

I find it difficult for this generation who pursue their future to maintain the good qualities of obedience and filial piety.
  

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Hello KK I'm a learner of English but I'll try. I hope any teacher would kindly correct it. Children were obedient to their parents in the old times.

  • Hello KK I'm a learner of English but I'll try.
  • I hope any teacher would kindly correct it.
  • Children were obedient to their parents in the old times.
  • Whenever old folk wanted care, their children stayed beside them.
  • Children had lived with parents until they graduated from school and found a job.
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Hello KK

I'm a learner of English but I'll try. I hope any teacher would kindly correct it.

Children were obedient to their parents in the old times. Whenever old folk wanted care, their children stayed beside them. Children had lived with parents until they graduated from school and found a job. Nowadays, however, it is hard for children to keep the virtues of obedience and f

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