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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
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I decide not to accept that a company donates some money to support the arts in favor of protecting the environment
Our garbage was dumped on a land where there become the main source of spreading viruses, resulting in some of resident came down with disease
Who are willing to be at the cost of people’s health in favor of choosing to appreciate the arts?
I don't konw how to revise these sentences.
Can you give me a hand with them.
Thank you for your help.
I decide not to accept that a company donates some money to support the arts in favor of protecting the environment
Our garbage was dumped on a land where there become the main source of spreading viruses, resulting in some of resident came down with disease
Who are willing to be at the cost of people’s health in favor of choosing to appreciate the arts?
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I cannot accept that (some companies donate) (a company has donated) money to support the arts instead of to protect the environment. Our garbage was dumped on land that has become a major source of spreading disease, causing some residents to contract viruses. Who is willing to choose to art appreciation at the expense of people’s health?
- I cannot accept that (some companies donate) (a company has donated) money to support the arts instead of to protect the environment.
- Our garbage was dumped on land that has become a major source of spreading disease, causing some residents to contract viruses.
- Who is willing to choose to art appreciation at the expense of people’s health?
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I cannot accept that (some companies donate) (a company has donated) money to support the arts instead of to protect the environment.
Our garbage was dumped on land that has become a major source of spreading disease, causing some residents to contract viruses.
Who is willing to choose to art appreciation at the expense of people’s health?
Perhaps someone el
Our garbage was dumped on land that has become a major source of spreading disease, causing some residents to contract viruses.
Who is willing to choose to art appreciation at the expense of people’s health?
Perhaps someone el
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Hi,
Here're are my suggestions:
I refuse to accept that a company can donate money to suppor the arts and neglect the protection of the environment.
Our garbage was dumped on a site that became a major source of spreading disease and some people got infected.
Who can possibly choose to appreciate the arts and turn a blind eye to people's health?
I hope
Here're are my suggestions:
I refuse to accept that a company can donate money to suppor the arts and neglect the protection of the environment.
Our garbage was dumped on a site that became a major source of spreading disease and some people got infected.
Who can possibly choose to appreciate the arts and turn a blind eye to people's health?
I hope
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