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Akki Posted 19 years ago
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00 Read the exerpt below to deterimine the grammar of the paragraph. 02 br
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00 ABC stores will offer discounts and coupons which will entice customer to step inside our stores. Offers include, but are not limited to: $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month, 00 which differs from the corporation's current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent. (is the highlighted part gramatically correct?). 02 br
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00 Did the above sound better or is this a better way of saying it... 02 br
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00 which differs from our current $10 back for every $200 spent, offered to customers now. 02 br
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00 I appreciate your opinion regaring the highlighted part. 0-
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00 Read the exerpt below to deterimine the grammar of the paragraph. 02 br
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00 ABC stores will offer discounts and coupons which will entice customer to step inside our stores. Offers include, but are not limited to: $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month, 00 which differs from the corporation's current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent. (is the highlighted part gramatically correct?). 02 br
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00 Did the above sound better or is this a better way of saying it... 02 br
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00 which differs from our current $10 back for every $200 spent, offered to customers now. 02 br
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00 I appreciate your opinion regaring the highlighted part. 0-
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02 br 02 br 01 font 00 ABC stores will offer discounts and coup 01 font 00 ons 02 font 00 01 font 00 to 02 font 00 entice customer 01 font 00 s 02 font 00 to step inside our stores. Offers include, but are not limited to 01 font 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 02 font 00 $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month 02 font 01 font 00 . 02 font 00 This 00 differs from our current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent.
- 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 ABC stores will offer discounts and coup 01 font 00 ons 02 font 00 01 font 00 to 02 font 00 entice customer 01 font 00 s 02 font 00 to step inside our stores.
- Offers include, but are not limited to 01 font 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 02 font 00 $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month 02 font 01 font 00 .
- 02 font 00 This 00 differs from our current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent.
- 02 br 02 br 00 You could also say 01 font 00 This 01 i 00 improves on 02 i 00 our current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent.
- 02 font 02 br 02 br 02 br 00 Best wishes, Clive 02 br 00 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 I suggest this. 02 br
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00 I suggest this. 02 br
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