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When attending university, he studied diligently in library day and night and it was no exception in summer and winter vacation.
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When attending university, he studied diligently in library day and night and it was no exception in summer and winter vacation.
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While a university student, he studied diligently in the library day and night. He never took a break, even for summer and winter vacation.
- While a university student, he studied diligently in the library day and night.
- He never took a break, even for summer and winter vacation.
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While a university student, he studied diligently in the library day and night. He never took a break, even for summer and winter vacation.
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An alternative for the last clause:
'...even during the summer and winter vacations'.
MrP
'...even during the summer and winter vacations'.
MrP
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Or:
'At university, he studied diligently in the library day and night, even during vacations.'
(Sorry, it's a Japanese national holiday, and I have a lot of free time today.)
'At university, he studied diligently in the library day and night, even during vacations.'
(Sorry, it's a Japanese national holiday, and I have a lot of free time today.)
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At university, he studied diligently in the library day and night, even during vacations.
Mr M's suggestion (above), at only 14 words, is by far the best.
My hat is off to Mr M.
Mr M's suggestion (above), at only 14 words, is by far the best.
My hat is off to Mr M.
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