Need writing help-not very much correction- but there may be some reading

Hi,

I am working on a summary report. I didn't have any teacher before. I learned English from internet. So writing is the most difficult thing for me. I wrote my article on my native language and now I have to translate it in English. It doesn't have to be perfect. If you can understand what I mean that would be ok for me. I am not looking for complete correction. Because it would take very much time. Please say me if there is any real disaster.

Thank you...

Here is the first pharagraph:

Thinking on music probably started right alongside with making music at remote past which we do not know. The impact of music on human and on time is undoubtedly glorious and magical. Muzik has an indispansable and deep place in lives of individuals and societies through individuals. When people contact to music they lost in a fog consist of unseen and unknown it does not matter who they are: They can be primitive who are performing their ritual, which full of craziness and madness, that ritual connect them to the supernatural, or they can be present day concert hall audience who is mature, content and calm. It is hard to listen analytically even for a conscious audience, who probably left behind most of their knowledge when they listening music. In this case the impact of music should be much more magical for primitive era people. The nature of such a powerful and magical phenomenon always would be at the center of human curiosity.



And I am going to continue translating and adding here...