Need urgent help with the motivation letter. Thank you very much !!!

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01b00I am making a career change and applying to a one year design program.02b02br
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01b00Below you may find motivation letter for the school.02b02br
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01b00I have to send the ML and application form by next week so I will be really glad if you can go over it and share your comments.02b02br
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01b00Thank you very very much.02b02br
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00Dear Mr / Ms,02br
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00I am applying to the one year Industrial Design Program and enclosed you may find my application documents. 02br
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00I chose xxx (Name ofthe school) because I have heard its reputation from many different sources and I know people who have attended fashion programs and greatly benefited from the heritage and experience of the school. Also XXX (Place of the school) is the home of many great designers and design brands so I believe it is a very inspiring place for young designers in both academic and business terms.02br
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00Industrial design is my particular area of interest because it allows one to enjoy the unique experience of transforming a concept, idea or need into a tangible object which people can touch, feel and use to ease their lives. I also equips the person with the ability to bring aesthetics and utility to different scopes of everyday life since its range is very broad. 02br
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00I believe that the first conditions for becoming a successful designer is having a strong eye for detail and beign a good observer and I am absolutely sure I posses both qualifications on a high standard. Although I have no prior design education, I took numerous drawing and ceramics electives both in high school and university as well as private drawing courses. I will also attend to drawing and Auto CAD classes so that I will have a good base before the program starts.02br
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00I am especially interested in furniture and tableware design and I believe my time in XXX (Name of the School) will also broaden my horizon to different fields of product design. 02br
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00Thank you for taking time to consider my application. I am strongly enthusiastic and motivated to fully meet the requirements of the Industrial Design program and I hope you are persuaded of my potential to perform well. I look forward to your positive response. 02br
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00Yours Sincerely,02br
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00Yours Sincerely,02br
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