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Hi,I will have an exam next week and I need a verification for the text below.I need someone to correct the words/grammar. Maybe also change the way it looks and sounds, but keeping the same meaning.Thank you, I will really apreciate it. Help! "Dear manager,I want to bring to your attention that I wish to make a complaint about your services.On the other day I had dinner with a good friend at your restaurant.It was a nice evening, we ordered our favorite food. We were served and from that moment the nice evening was spoiled. We noticed the plate wasn`t clean and on a closer look we saw a small hair next to the food.We called the waiter, we showed him and he apologized. He said we don`t have to pay anything.This is imposible. We will never ever going to eat again at your restaurant."

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To the Manager of the _______ Restaurant,

I am writing this to bring to your attention an incident involving substandard service at your restaurant. This happened yesterday when a friend and I ate at your establishment.

It was a beautiful evening, and we ordered the best dishes on the menu. But when we were served, the evening was ruined. One of the plates was dirty and there was a hair next to the food.

We called the waiter and complained, and he apologized and said we didn't have to pay for the meal.

But this whole episode is completely unacceptable. Unless we have assurances that something like this will never happen again, we cannot even begin to contemplate eating at your restaurant again.

Yours truly,

____________

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