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00Dear Sir / Madam,02br
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00I would like to apply for P.... Programme. (02h1

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00My motivation for applying this programme is because of the unmatched value X places upon it’s people and the excellent self development opportunities X provides. I was immediately convinced, when I read the X careers web page that starting a career at X is the chance of a lifetime to fulfill my objective of developing myself as a prospective business leader. 02br
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00I have studied Economics at X University in X. The university itself is the best internationally renowned university in X Only those students in the top five hundred00 00where there are one million and a half00 00applicants taking the university entrance exams are admitted to the university. Admission to such a university where students are highly competent equipped me with a constant awareness to be disciplined and an enthusiasm for change in order to ( necessary?) be ahead of others.02br
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00In terms of interpersonal communication, I am00 00responsive to my colleagues and am eager to help whenever possible. I am good at team work, able to consider and analyse different opinions, and take the lead when necessary. I am good at persuading others by creating relationships based on mutual trust and understanding.02br
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00I had an internship with Banca X. There I had the chance to serve as a marketing analyst for one and a half month during my 3 months internship period which was decisive in choosing my career path. Besides work experience I participated in a great range of social activities and held roles as supervisor, executive board member and president. During those activities I sometimes lead teams and sometimes was part of a team. Taking part in extra-curricular activities provided me with invaluable organizational and public communication skills.02br
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00I know X seeks only the brightest and most creative applicants for the graduate development programme. I also know that I have the ability it takes to perform the job effectively, and that I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic, internationally recognised IT company,02br
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00You can find my qualifications and skills in the enclosed resume. If you would like to have more information about my qualifications and skills, please contact me by e-mail or phone.02br
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00 I look forward to hearing from you.02br
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00 Yours sincerely,0-