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Hello friends,my lecturer ask me to do a descriptive essay..so,let me know my mistakes..really need ur help..

MY HOUSE

For me,a good family doesn't complete without having a proper place to live together.I believe that a good person comes from a good family,and a good family must live together in a house.I didn't see a house just like a place to stay,just a place to go when we finish our work.It's more a place to devolep a good personality in a human,because everything starts from home.

I have a very big family.So,we need a very proper place to live together.My father brought the house 4 years ago.It's a bungalow with 6 bedrooms and 4 bathrooms.Sounds so big,but it's not.My house is in a housing scheme and we have a good relationship among the neighbours.My house is in yellow color with red roof.In front of the house,there is 3 gates with blue color and a porch.Then,there's a compound beside the porch.My mother plants varieties of flowers and trees to make the compound looks more calm and beautiful.We have the mango trees,roses,hibiscus and many more.

When we enter the house,there is 2 living rooms.The first living room is for the guests and the relatives.My mother put a set of red sofa and two coffee tables there.There are also a vase with the flowers at the corner of the room.She also chose a pink curtain to make the room more cheerful.The second living room is for my family.It's more a place to my family to sit together and watch the tv.We put the tv and the DVD player on the rack.There are also a set of sofa in front of the tv with smooth pillows to make us comfortable while watching the tv.My mother put a green curtain for that room.Beside the second living room is a dining room.We have a dining table with 8 chairs.Nothing more valueable from having dinner with the family.We could notice two big racks contain a lot of books beside the first living room.I put all of my books there and even my primary books were still there.

For the master bedroom,there is a bathroom inside.There are also a bed,two wardrobes and a tv.My father sometimes watch the tv for the latenight programs.My room is next to my parent's.I just have a single bed, a wardrobe and the table for study.I chose pink for the curtain.

For the kitchen,there's a refrigirator beside the cabinets.My mother puts a rack beside the sink and there are also a bathroom behind the kitchen.I chose a yellow curtain for the windows.

Eventhough my house is not a big one,my family and I just happy to live together in that house.