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- There no advantages to being rich in Europe. Money can only buy you a certain amount of luxury. You also pay high taxes. In USA, there is no limit to what one can do with ones money. It's the american wife of life that has luster.
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Hi, Your version There are no advantages *to being rich in Europe. Money can only buy a small amount of luxuries. You also pay high taxes.
- Hi, Your version There are no advantages *to being rich in Europe.
- Money can only buy a small amount of luxuries.
- You also pay high taxes.
- In the USA, there is no limit to what one can do with one's money.
- It's the American wife who adds luster.
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Hi,
Your version
There are no advantages *to being rich in Europe. Money can only buy a small amount of luxuries.
You also pay high taxes. In the USA, there is no limit to what one can do with one's money.
It's the American wife who adds luster.
My revised version
There are no great advantages *to being rich in Europe. In practical ter
Your version
There are no advantages *to being rich in Europe. Money can only buy a small amount of luxuries.
You also pay high taxes. In the USA, there is no limit to what one can do with one's money.
It's the American wife who adds luster.
My revised version
There are no great advantages *to being rich in Europe. In practical ter
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