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Kedra Posted 13 years ago
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Need to make sure the text sounds English. Please advise.
Hi all,
Working on the concept for the Christmas card for our customers. I have two texts that I need a native speaker's help on. I care about how they sound. Thanks in advance for any advice you can give.
The texts are:
1. When was the last time you wrote a letter to Santa?...
Make a wish and write it now using the enclosed template.
Remember: miracles happen for those who believe...
Now is the best time to start believing.
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
2. Sometimes you just should make a little step towards miracles.
Merry Christmas!
That's it.
Working on the concept for the Christmas card for our customers. I have two texts that I need a native speaker's help on. I care about how they sound. Thanks in advance for any advice you can give.
The texts are:
1. When was the last time you wrote a letter to Santa?...
Make a wish and write it now using the enclosed template.
Remember: miracles happen for those who believe...
Now is the best time to start believing.
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
2. Sometimes you just should make a little step towards miracles.
Merry Christmas!
That's it.
Top answer
1. When was the last time you wrote a letter to Santa?... Make a wish using the enclosed template.
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- When was the last time you wrote a letter to Santa?...
- Make a wish using the enclosed template.
- Remembe r—m iracles happen for those who believe...
- Now is the best time to start believing.
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When was the last time you wrote a letter to Santa?...
Make a wish using the enclosed template.
Remember—miracles happen for those who believe...
Now is the best time to start believing.
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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Sometime you should just take a small step toward a miracle.
When was the last time you wrote a letter to Santa?...
Make a wish using the enclosed template.
Remember—miracles happen for those who believe...
Now is the best time to start believing.
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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Sometime you should just take a small step toward a miracle.
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