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Lime mango 901 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar
Need to determine if commas are appropriate in the follownig sentence - specifically the prepositional phrase I have underlined..
Working with the Hancock County Family Resource Center, St. Vincent DePaul and many donors and volunteers, this office strives to make sure that may children, who otherwise would not have this opportunity, do experience it and have a positive start to the school year.
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lime mango 901 Working with the Hancock County Family Resource Center, St. Vincent DePaul and many donors and volunteers, this office strives to make sure that many childre n w ho otherwise would not have this opportunit y e xperience it and make a positive start to the school year. No commas.
- lime mango 901 Working with the Hancock County Family Resource Center, St.
- Vincent DePaul and many donors and volunteers, this office strives to make sure that many childre n w ho otherwise would not have this opportunit y e xperience it and make a positive start to the school year.
- No commas.
- If you do not like the juxtaposition of 'opportunity' and 'experience', you will have to recast your statement.
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lime mango 901Working with the Hancock County Family Resource Center, St. Vincent DePaul and many donors and volunteers, this office strives to make sure that many children who otherwise would not have this opportunity experience it and
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