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Need something more creative (Sam)
can something more creatively done on this below sentence "They celebrated their wedding on 18th August 2003 at Garden City, INDIA."
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How about; The happy couple's wedding was celebrated with great fanfare in the presence of friends, relatives and the media at India's most wonderful Garden City on August the 18th in the year 2003. Is this creative enough? Can we add pyrotechnical displays, dancing dolphins and doilies too?
- How about; The happy couple's wedding was celebrated with great fanfare in the presence of friends, relatives and the media at India's most wonderful Garden City on August the 18th in the year 2003.
- Is this creative enough?
- Can we add pyrotechnical displays, dancing dolphins and doilies too?
- Cheers to the happy couple, from Mike in Japan
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How about;
The happy couple's wedding was celebrated with great fanfare in the presence of friends, relatives and the media at India's most wonderful Garden City on August the 18th in the year 2003.
Is this creative enough? Can we add pyrotechnical displays, dancing dolphins and doilies too?
Cheers to the happy couple, from Mike in Japan
The happy couple's wedding was celebrated with great fanfare in the presence of friends, relatives and the media at India's most wonderful Garden City on August the 18th in the year 2003.
Is this creative enough? Can we add pyrotechnical displays, dancing dolphins and doilies too?
Cheers to the happy couple, from Mike in Japan
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