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Can someone tell me what is wrong with the Grammar in this paragraph below. Is there a run on sentence in here? The last two sentences just don't sound right to me. Please I welcome your criticism.

Quarterly Market Statistics are used in nearly process for planning and managing iAutomobile sales. The Auto trader application will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams;flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions.

Freakynick · Accepted Answer

Okay. A few things here, I'll highlight them for you;

Quarterly Market Statistics are used in nearly [need a word here] process for planning and managing iAutomobile sales. The Auto trader application will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to [need a word here] changing market space as well as analytical solutions.
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1) You have a word missing and you need an adjective like 'every.'

2) Is this part of the title? If so, it should be a capital letter.

3) In "iAutomobile" because I am not sure if the "i" is intentional or a spelling error.

4) The word "expedient" is an adjective. You probably mean the very 'expediate' (This is a very formal word not used very often, by the way.)

5) Continue using a comma here.

6 and 7) You need verbs here. You are talking about what the Auto Trader software can do and correctly use "to foster" as the first thing in your list of abilities. As such, all the other points should be verbs too, like I mentioned with point 4. I would recommend changing "flexible adaption" to "adapt flexibly" and "analytical solutions" to "develop analytical solutions."

8) You are missing an article here.

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