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Scryed Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance
need some help with the grammar on the paragraph below
need some help with the paragraph below. Please check to see if there's any grammer mistakes and which one is the better one of the two? And if possible, please show me a improve paragraph with the same information. Thank you very much!
Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to be able to deliver your goods on time and ensure they are in unscratched.
Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to deliver your goods on time and ensure they are in unscratched.
Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to be able to deliver your goods on time and ensure they are in unscratched.
Our mission is to provide customers with reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility to deliver your goods on time and ensure they are in unscratched.
Top answer
You just need to change the word "solution" to "solutions".
- You just need to change the word "solution" to "solutions".
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Neither is correct:
Our mission is to provide our customers with a reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility in being able to deliver their goods on time and in ensuring
Our mission is to provide our customers with a reliable, flexible and cost effective solution to all their logistics needs. We take great pride and responsibility in being able to deliver their goods on time and in ensuring
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I have also been a business studies teacher all my life. I assumed that because you have various customers, they might each require a different solution for their individual needs. Therefore I used the plural tense for solutions to match the plural word "customers" - but not knowing exactly what your business is, and the number and variety of solutions you have, I used the plural. You ca
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