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-Max- Posted 6 years ago
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Need some help with small contexts writing please.

Hi guys new to this forum and actually signed up to get help from lovely comunity here if possible please.


To cut long story short I just launched new Social Networking Website called Fleeped

www.FLEEPED.com

( please remove link if not allowed )


It's oriented as family friendly and actually designed for public and all age groups. I somehow want to add this information to invitation email and so far this is what I have.


I'm not really savvy in English Language or correct grammar or even wording lol so I do apologise in advance.


What I need help with is to correctly put this wording together. Its kinda invitation email.


You welcome to modify this wording to make it more correct or even welcoming.


Please see current email template below


Fastest Growing

Social Networking Website



AWESOME PROFILE FUNCTIONS

BEST PROFILE FUNCTIONS AND LAYOUT.

Send gifts to friends or family members,

Fully customize your profile

Find friends nearby

Really easy to use

AMAZING ANIMATED REACTIONS

BEST REACTIONS FOR ANY OCCASION!!!

Unlike other Social Sites we dont have 2 or 5 reactions we have added 12 in total!!! This incluides Thumbs UP, Thumbs Down, Love, Laugh, WoW, Sad, Angry, Party, Sick, Amazing, Cute and Confused.

FAMILY & CHILD FRIENDLY


FULLY FAMILY & CHILD

FRIENDLY

Fleeped is fully family and child friendly, it is impossible to post any adult material as any images which are not child friendly get automatically blocked.

EASY TO REACH US

CONTACT ADMIN DIRECTLY...

Unlike other social sites you can reach admin or staff member really easy, no matter how big or small your issue or suggestion is we will always reply to you and listen.



Any help would be greatly appreciated

  
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