Need some help with grammar and punctuation Please!

I was supposed to write a letter as a pilgrim( I chose to be Wife of Bath from Canterbury Tales) to mother and tell her about my pilgrimage and 3 fellow travellers. Any help is appreciated. Thank you.


Dear Mother,
It’s me, Wife of Bath. I know I should’ve write to you earlier but I couldn’t get myself to do it. I know you’re waiting anxiously to hear news from me. My pilgrimage is going really well. I’ve met so many interesting people I’d not be able to meet at home. You know me really well and you know that I can’t be alone. I don’t know how to be alone. I need a man in my life all the time. So as you know I’m not traveling by myself. I have three fellow travellers with me who seek for something they couldn’t find at home as me. One of them is Ms. Sonja she has a husband waiting for her at home but she’s not happy with him. She came with me to find happiness, she doesnt have with her husband. Another person that travel with us is Ms. Rubik. I don’t really know why she’s came with us because she has a really good life and great husband. She’s not seeking for lovers or anything like that. I just think she came because she’s bored at home. Her husband is away a lot and she’s just alone in a big house. The most important person that travel with us is Mr. Din. I can tell you right now that he’s going to be my next husband. He doesn’t know this yet but he will be. He is very handsome guy. He is way younger than me. He has a dark her and brown eyes. He has a strong build, full of muscles. Oh Mother, he’s so handsome. I’ve noticed that he was checking me a few times now and I can tell you that he wants something more. When I’ll have a chance I will talk to him more. I could write about him a lot but want to tell you more about my pilgrimage. Our pilgrimage is going really well as planned. We’ve visited Canadian Rocky Mountains today. It was so beautiful there. We’ve spend few hours in Banff to do some shopping, to get some souvenirs. We also went to Banff Park Museum National Historic Site of Canada which was the most interesting place I’ve seen for a long time. You know how much I love history. I’ve seen few lakes. We went to see Lake Louise, Moraine Lake and Lake Minewanka. The most beautiful was Moraine Lake. It was sky blue lake. So beautiful. We’ve visited few villages as well. As I mentioned while we were in Banff we did some shopping but we also has a short walk around the town.. We’ve also visited Lake Louise and went for a walk there. I really enjoyed it. We went to Fairmont Chateau Lake LouiseResort Hotel. It’s a hotel now but also a historic site. It was amazing to see different culture and all antique furniture’s. Our trip is getting to an end soon. I will tell you more about it when I get back home.

Love you Mother
Wife of Bath