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Sashline Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Need some help with correcting , plz

How to correct this :
" So this is my first postcard ever and I am surprised by the small space given to write something that surely wont contains all that I want to say".
  

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This is the first postcard I have ever sent, and I am surprised by the small space given to write in. It surely cannot contain all that I want to say.

  • This is the first postcard I have ever sent, and I am surprised by the small space given to write in.
  • It surely cannot contain all that I want to say.
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This is the first postcard I have ever sent, and I am surprised by the small space given to write in. It surely cannot contain all that I want to say.
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So this is my first postcard ever and I am surprised by the small space given to write something that surely won't contain all that I want to say".

This is a better phrasing:
Since this is my first postcard ever, I am surprised by the small space that one has to write something. It surely won't be eno
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oh this is really nice. thanks for both suggestions

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