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Hamadresh Posted 14 years ago
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need some help to improve this contents
Dear Sirs,
As discussed last time with you here the opportunity to present your firm and give us your proposal fees for this project , the site is in north of Erbil/Iraq near the Turkish border and been designed by CAA and been approved.
AUC (based in Erbil and founded by myself and i am the manager director) has joint venture with CAA.
Now the Soran university needs to justify the design and get as much architectural firm to in rich the project and to get different views with other thoughts.
Soran university has already contacted Foster ,Richard Rojer and BDP to propose their offers .
This projects will be funded by Soran university through Kurdish regional government KRG .
As discussed last time with you here the opportunity to present your firm and give us your proposal fees for this project , the site is in north of Erbil/Iraq near the Turkish border and been designed by CAA and been approved.
AUC (based in Erbil and founded by myself and i am the manager director) has joint venture with CAA.
Now the Soran university needs to justify the design and get as much architectural firm to in rich the project and to get different views with other thoughts.
Soran university has already contacted Foster ,Richard Rojer and BDP to propose their offers .
This projects will be funded by Soran university through Kurdish regional government KRG .
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I am not sure I understand exactly what you want to say. But let me try to clean up your sentences. Dear Sirs, As discussed last time with you, we would like to offer you the opportunity make a presentation about your firm and give us your fee proposal for this project.
- I am not sure I understand exactly what you want to say.
- But let me try to clean up your sentences.
- Dear Sirs, As discussed last time with you, we would like to offer you the opportunity make a presentation about your firm and give us your fee proposal for this project.
- The approved site, which has been designed by CAA, is north of Erbil, Iraq near the Turkish border.
- I am the founder and managing director of AUC.
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I am not sure I understand exactly what you want to say. But let me try to clean up your sentences.
Dear Sirs,
As discussed last time with you, we would like to offer you the opportunity make a presentation about your firm and give us your fee proposal for this project. The approved site, which has been designed by CAA, is north of Erbil, Iraq near the Turkish border.
Dear Sirs,
As discussed last time with you, we would like to offer you the opportunity make a presentation about your firm and give us your fee proposal for this project. The approved site, which has been designed by CAA, is north of Erbil, Iraq near the Turkish border.
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thank you DR , very nice of you i will copy paste the whole letter to you so that you can correct and common on all, thank you again for your help and support.
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